Pascal Derrien

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Have I Left My Schizophrenic Teddy Behind?

Have I Left My Schizophrenic Teddy Behind?


It’s raining umbrellas today and the corridor is suddenly very grey

Never been there before so I thought maybe it should be that way

I was expecting it to be creepy but it turns out to be kind of funny

Yet I don’t understand how the air has become so steamy

How has it happened that I am just surfing inside of me?

It went rather quickly but at times I have found some conversations rather lengthy

I think we met not only once but twice already, you even tried to give me a kissy

Where to from here, is it the final pier where you end up your human career?

I told everybody and especially that crook that under no circumstances he should mention me in a book

I have always acted with rigor if not with splendour and I will always be known for my uber composure

I have promised to be silent on my way to the forever garage

I am still puffing but I know I am very close to turn the last page

But you, who have always been so kind, not like others who have always been blind.

Do you know if I have left my schizophrenic teddy behind?



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Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #30

#32
thanks Cyndi wilkins the ultimate question after all ? :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #29

#34
Aleta Curry I am not so sure about that one but thanks so much for saying so :-)

#31
When you're a star, you gotta learn to run with the big boys.

Cyndi wilkins

4 years ago #27

"Where to from here, is it the final pier where you end up your human career?" Excellent question...This one leaves you scratching your head...in a good way;-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #26

#30
thanks Franci\ud83d\udc1dEugenia Hoffman practice makes perfect ... oh gosh the pressure :-)

Awesome piece, Pascal. Your writing gets better and better, IMO, as it leaves the reader eagerly waiting for your next post.

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #24

#28
many thanks debasish majumder for reading and saying so :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #23

#25
speaking of education can you stop spamming my thread with comments which have nothing to do with the topic, can you delete them please

don kerr

4 years ago #22

#21
Slàinte agad-sa Pascal Derrien

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #21

#18
hmm thanks for reading I cannot ask for anything more :-) Sara Jacobovici :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #20

#20
Cheers & sante Don \ud83d\udc1d Kerr !!!

don kerr

4 years ago #19

Pascal Derrien Would it help if I raised a dram of 'Writers Tears' in your honour? Well done friend.

Sara Jacobovici

4 years ago #18

Pascal Derrien writes beyond words.

Sara Jacobovici

4 years ago #17

I can not add much to what has already been written Pascal Derrien. The piece transports me and the music is a seamless attachment. Thanks for sharing your writing.

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #16

#16
Phil Friedman oh gosh I am not sure it is all.... that :-) but the article seems to have its own dynamic, I actually had not planned to write this at all, it came up yesterday evening. Many thanks for the kind words

Phil Friedman

4 years ago #15

If you read enough, from time to time, you'll come across a piece that's really striking and which reaches into your being to grab your spirit by the throat. This is one of those times, and this piece by Pascal Derrien does just that. I highly recommend you read it, but not try to decipher it. Instead, accept it at face value. For it will then be what you need it to be, -- which is something that a great piece always is.

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #14

#14
just writing my head away Paul Walters just writing my head away sir ☺

Paul Walters

4 years ago #13

Pascal Derrien wow you are truly on a roll today sir!!!

Lisa Gallagher

4 years ago #12

#10
LOL my mind has been mush lately! I had some great visuals while reading this Pascal :))

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #11

#6
thanks Kevin Baker let's breath away :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #10

#7
thanks Ken Boddie, a simple journey from A to B :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #9

#8
thanks Lisa \ud83d\udc1d Gallagher , appreciate the encouragements I am not great at sequels you may have to finish it :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #8

#5
Dean Owen I can think of 5 or 6 interpretations but it is whatever story I just wrote it :-)

Lisa Gallagher

4 years ago #7

I think there needs to be a part 2, I sort of feel as though I'm hanging. Your writing is captivating, Pascal Derrien. I have to say, for a moment I thought of a sauna but then I read another line and knew I was off basis. To be continued?

Ken Boddie

4 years ago #6

You left several teddys here on the corridor floor, Pascal. Perhaps the self assured one with the social conscience and the umbrella is yours? Or are they all queuing up waiting for the mood to change with the end of the rain?

Dean Owen

4 years ago #5

You left me guessing, but I will not prod.

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #4

#2
yes Joyce Bowen a decent one :-)

Pascal Derrien

4 years ago #3

#1
thanks Devesh Bhatt introspective :-)

sounds like an asylum

Devesh 🐝 Bhatt

4 years ago #1

Deep

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